In the quiet dark,
His kisses are all that isβ€”
Pinpricks of fire.


  1. Joseph Gilmore
    Feb 23, 2012

    Nicely done. Purposefully ambiguous or not, I like that we don’t know whether pinpricks of fire are pleasant.

  2. Rivertrance
    Feb 24, 2012

    Too beautiful…! Spare and intense.

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